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while, of course, this poem was not top notch (it was a free write, after all), it was well written for exposing your feelings. i always understood your point of ...

Shadow searching in a cathedral while vocalising to the choir's tune angel's shattered tears are on the dripping window fantastic fantasies flipping over each other while spitting diamonds up into ...

this is a uselesss comment, and for that i apologize. but this was rather...uh... wonderful. i absolutely loved this. it really moved me and i loved every line of it.

i really enjoyed this poem. it was full of random and wonderfully described images and was simply casual but it was true and i definitely know what it feels like ...

Our hymn couldn’t have been sung better On a Tuesday For it was an afternoon Where the sunlight dazzles the mind and spots the skin Where the kisses are saved ...

I loved the title - thoguh personal quotes from the author in the title often aggravate me. Perhaps that's a personal quirk of mine, but I think you might get ...

Bleeding yellow roses That sprout and take root They grow into my life And slowly begin to take over I feel the pain Of the thorns stabbing into my temples ...

Wow. I loved the second stanza, espicially the part that follows: -- the kiss of a wet- eyed man on the subway, harmless and deranged, and we want to kill ...

Right. You know, you'd really be good if you didn't attack everyone who tries to critique your poetry. It's a good thing that I don't go back to poems after ...

I really enjoyed this. It certainly captivated the meaning of Home and held my attetion. The imagery was beautiful and I agreed with your points, which helps me like the ...

Well, don't get me wrong, it was definitely a work of art. Every description was startaling and mind shattering. But the angry outbursts, while adding to the meaning of the ...

(I'm just posting this to ask of those who have the guts to critizise people. I love writing, so here is a taste of a story I just recently started, ...

I don't have much to say about this. It didn't really move me but it was good. But I didn't like the last two lines - up until then I ...

“There comes a time, In every man’s life, When he realizes he’s alive.” It was a hooking beginning and it held me all the way through. I loved the reference ...

you speak paradoxical phenomenons and your heart is an aura of arrogance I loved the literaries here. Or whatever their called - hence the "paradoxical phenomenons" and the "aura of ...